i really like this. its one of your best pieces. the front paws are a little out of proportion and the moon could do without the craters because it distracts from the beauty and focus on umbreon. if you could find a way to make the moon look like its glowing instead of just a blotchy sphere in the sky, it would be amazing! i think it would look even better if first, the moon was more round, and second and more importantly, was blurred at the edges instead of having craters. the shading is amazing and the water looks great but i think the water should get darker the further back it goes especially since its currently darkest where it spashes at umbreons feet. i really love the way the moonlight feflects off the water subtly cuz if it was any more then it would like a stage set or something. exaggerating the eyes (especially the viewer's left one) would really make it pop more towards the pokemon rather than the water. i really like how new this was, though. ive never seen a dark type on a block of ice in the middle of the sea before. in fact, the only thing ive ever seen with an umbreon before is the night and that kinda goes without saying. an overall amazing piece of art and i hope you continue to work to become your very best!
Wow, this looks so awesome! Although i have to say, at first i thought it was daytime ^_^' The pose is awesome (although the frontmost paw seems a bit too long....) and how hes looking at you is even awesomer The water is interesting, but the block of ice/rock its standing on is a bit too...perfect :/ you wouldnt normally see a rock that thats perfect, now would you? The shading on the umbreon is perfect But the sky.....it looks a bit uninteresting :/ so you have the umbreon in the foreground and the water in the midground, but the background is just one solid dark color :/ If it is nighttime, the water and sky wouldnt be able to be seen the farther away you get from camera (itll just all go black the farther back you go) Maybe you could have done something with the lighting to focus the attention more on the umbreon (more contrast?) Otherwise, great job
I hope my critique helps you improve in your later artworks
I love this picture so much! It look AMAZING! <3 The only thing I don't like about it is the moon ;-; The moon is taking my eyes from Umbreon to the moon xp
The water is interesting, but the block of ice/rock its standing on is a bit too...perfect :/ you wouldnt normally see a rock that thats perfect, now would you?
The shading on the umbreon is perfect
But the sky.....it looks a bit uninteresting :/ so you have the umbreon in the foreground and the water in the midground, but the background is just one solid dark color :/
If it is nighttime, the water and sky wouldnt be able to be seen the farther away you get from camera (itll just all go black the farther back you go)
Maybe you could have done something with the lighting to focus the attention more on the umbreon (more contrast?)
Otherwise, great job
I hope my critique helps you improve in your later artworks
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